Perfidy.
The title tells all.
I fear I now betray you
as you betray yourself,
an epitaph to fading love
that rose within a heart’s
first beat,
to fall before its last.
© sweetwater 2023
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The title tells all.
I fear I now betray you
as you betray yourself,
an epitaph to fading love
that rose within a heart’s
first beat,
to fall before its last.
You tell us such a lot here in so few words – hope you have recovered 😉
gerry.
Hi Gerry, thank you for your comment I appreciate it. 🙂 I’m happy to wait and see how things pan out, plus I’m not personally involved 🙂 Sue
Wonderfully succinct, delightful short. I love it. Sorry I don’t know the “wrong thing” hope it’s nothing serious Sue.
Mike X
Hi Mike, so pleased you loved it, thank you. And no nothing serious except to me, all tied up with Don McLean and all the unpleasant things being revealed about him. After 45 years I’m questioning my loyalties that’s all. Lovely to see you back on here. Sue xx
If only he would issue his own statement about what has gone, and is going on now, I could judge properly, but it’s all second guessing by those I talk to who knew or know him, but they don’t really know his side or why things happened as they did. But he is saying nothing about his private life he never does, it remains private. I am so pleased you think so highly of my poem, is it just presentation or layout too? I personally like the layout, but not sure what to do about presentation and have no idea… Read more »