April Day.

It was a beautiful warm dawn, promising a lovely day…


The day rose with beauty

a smile blossomed

with the dawning,

yet held a hint of cruelty

within the beating

of her heart.

Harsh were words

upon her breath

and mighty fell her

swords of ice

as dawn dissolved 

to grey.

© sweetwater 2021
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Gerry

Very descriptive of a typical April day, I liked it 😉
Gerry.

Elfstone

I like this very much, but may I suggest a full stop after “heart” (and upper case H on “Harsh”). The poem reads as two sentences, so make the punctuation fit that? Very descriptive of the weather here this last week! Elfstone

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