April Day.
It was a beautiful warm dawn, promising a lovely day…
The day rose with beauty
a smile blossomed
with the dawning,
yet held a hint of cruelty
within the beating
of her heart.
Harsh were words
upon her breath
and mighty fell her
swords of ice
as dawn dissolved
to grey.
© sweetwater 2021
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Very descriptive of a typical April day, I liked it 😉
Gerry.
Thank you :-). Sue.
I like this very much, but may I suggest a full stop after “heart” (and upper case H on “Harsh”). The poem reads as two sentences, so make the punctuation fit that? Very descriptive of the weather here this last week! Elfstone
Thank you Elfstone, I’d been messing about with that on and off and still hadn’t really decided, so I appreciate your suggestion and will amend.
I’m hopeful May will be more favourable. 🙂 Sue.