Burying the past
Burying the past
He was staring into my eyes.
“The past is the past, we don’t live there anymore.
It needs to be buried….let it go; we need to move on”
“Indeed” I replied…as I pulled the trigger.
Even with the suppresser, the noise of the shot sounded loud.
The shock on his face as the bullet hit him in the chest;
he thought he had reached me.
I stepped forwards as he fell back, and fired again.
This time a head shot, the coup-de-gras.
Now the past was in the past, now I could bury it.
Now I could move on. I reached for the shovel.
© mikeverdi 2023
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HaHa! It was an issue of a parking space in Morrisons. I’m thinking of using it as a starter for a short story that’s buzzing around in my head. Thanks for reading and commenting Trevor.
Mike
Love it, love it, love it. No quarter, I say and how clever is the bit about ‘burying the past’. Yes, this is succinct and scenic. A very nice bit of flash.
blessings,
jolen
Thanks for digging into my past Jolen HaHa! The encouraging words are much appreciated
Mike