The Old Sea Dog
A poor doggie’s tail
The Old Sea Dog
The smell of seaweed
That’s washed up on the shore,
Along with plastic bottles
Also part of an old door.
There he lay
Looking sad and bedraggled,
In his poor lonely way
No sign of life at all.
From the body so fragile and small
We carried him high above the tide line
With our hands, dug in the soft ground.
Laying him in a shallow grave
So humble, yet so fine.
We said a small prayer
For the lost soul that lay there.
Then we covered the grave
With a weather beaten log.
We wrote on these simple words
“Here lies an old sea dog.”
© potleek 2023
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I liked this very much, but was sad for the dog of course, a couple of things I picked up, 4th line there is a small typo. And I had a little difficulty following the rhythm as it was a bit inconsistent, but other than that the images were very good and the poem itself carried a storyline. Sue.
Sue thank you so much for reading and pointing out the typo.
I had tried several times to cut and paste this to the site, but got no joy.
Last attempt was to type direct. Alas I kind of got it a little wrong.
Thanks again…Tony
Nice imagery for a sad tale.
Eira
Eira, many thanks for reading and commenting.
Many people lose their pets, it would be nice to know that someone cared enough to tend them in their final resting place…Tony