Requiem for the Living
A poem dedicated to the veterans of the Borneo campaign 1962-1966 and all the other small forgotten wars.
And as they stand hymn book in hand
Around memorial stone
Each part of the congregation
Yet each of them alone
They all have their memories
Of comrades they once knew
Their own unique experience
Memories clear and true
Theirs was just a small war
No charging in great mass
But creeping around from tree to tree
Or wading through morass
Their bodies hung with leeches
Watching out for snakes
Where a man can die from mosquito fly
Or the simplest of mistakes
Of sleeping on a jungle floor
In the monsoon rain
Of wondering will he ever
See his home again
And then the short sharp action
All over very fast
But the screams still haunt his dreams
And will until the last
He is just an old man now
Bright eyed but weak of frame
Who was never hailed a hero,
Who never courted fame
Who fought for what he thought was right
And willingly he went forth
To simply fight for freedom
And all that freedom’s worth
Thank you Goth for your kind and considered comment. I can write free verse when I want to but you’re quite right I do prefer rhyme. Can’t say I agree entirely with Bozz about the gravitas, though. I’ve written poems such as “Tell” and “Joshua” which deal with a very serious subject but don’t consider the rhyme has detracted from their impact.
Good of you to comment mate.
Thanks,Luigi,
Insightful comment as usual and much appreciated. I’ll see if I can find “Tell” on my other site and post it.
grateful for your input
Tony.