Autumn Steps.

I think the title gives it away ๐Ÿ™‚


A robin sings..

The day holds her breath,

everything is still, quiet,

drinking in his song.

Grey eye’d clouds

stay their hand,

as autumn steps

with gentle touch,

towards goodbye.

© sweetwater 2023
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nemo

Nice, Sue. I’m in a town at the moment and am missing these beautiful quiet moments in autumn.

Gerald

mitch

Hi Sue – I love the simplicity and symmetry of this. Mitch

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