Requiem
My last post on old UKA …
It’s time to go now.
There’s an empty space
where my heart used to be,
and the wind blows cold,
colder than I’ve ever known.
It’s time to go now.
Time to pull a curtain around my soul
and say goodbye.
No – don’t cry, don’t cry
because I die,
and the pen is dry.
You seem to be in a valedictory mood this week val. This is lovely, but sad … Elf
Yes, it would seem so elfstone. They are not newly written, re-posts across from UKA. Thanks for commenting, and for your kind remarks.
Val xx
Hi Val
This is hard to read, the anguish is so raw.
A different style for you. You do it well. The last line so final, excellent.
I hear you. I admire those who are not scared or inhibited from laying their soul on the line in brave writing like this.
I hope your pen is not dry. You have too much to offer 😉
Alison xx
Thank you again Alison. This was written quite some time ago, and I have been struggling to write anything much for a while now. “Try harder” as they used to say in school !!
Val xx
This is so delicately and achingly sad, Val, and exquisitely penned. Keep writing, the words will come back.
Thank you again Tony. I wish the words would come back, they are just not there any more. But I guess we all suffer from writers block from time to time, maybe it’s a good thing.
Best wishes.
Val x
Heart achingly sad, but so beautiful. Sue x
I posted a comment but it hasn’t come up, I tried again and was told it was already posted? So I hope you got it. Sue x
Thank you Sue, comment received. Don’t know what happened with my responses to comments on my other sub – they’re all over the place ! Don’t know if it’s me going senile, or glitches on the site. Anyway, all seems to be okay now.
Val xx