Memory Lane
A poem…
I often go down
memory lane.
I find it comforting,
it keeps me sane.
I don’t look my age,
I’m frequently told
and to be honest
I don’t feel old.
Yet I belong
to a bygone era:
there was no Euro
but the Italian lira,
the franc, the mark,
the English pound
and the world economy
wasn’t too sound.
It was quite hard
for me to get by
so to my land
had to say goodbye.
The names of the friends
I left behind
I haven’t forgotten,
they are fixed in my mind.
Although with certainty
I cannot tell
how many to this earth
have said farewell.
© Luigi Pagano 2016
© ionicus 2023
Luigi ‘ricordi portare dolore così dolce’ Nice one, I have a memory poem somewhere I will see if I can dig it out.
trouble is it makes me cry…
Hi Gerry, I remember your comment in Italian when I posted this on the old UKA and it was very much appreciated as it is now. Many thanks.
One of your good ones this – very good rhythm and rhyme. I wonder if you might emphasise that by halving the number of lines as in
“I often go down memory lane.
I find it comforting, it keeps me sane.” … etc ? Just a thought. 🙂
Sadly, when one gets to our age, friends do start to depart and it is a real shock. Elf.
Hi, Elf. At the moment I am posting for testing purposes and am not much concerned about the format but thanks for your suggestion. I am sure that more can be said with fewer lines and will bear it in mind when we have a settled website.
Memory Lane is a great place to visit, especially these days. Nice poem.
The good old days, eh? Happy memories are easier to remember.