My only fictional story in the first person. Other fiction has always been in third person. Any critique or comment more than welcome. I’m particularly keen to learn if any of the paragraphs should be shorter. (Including in Part 1 previously submitted) Thanks. This is the second and final part of a short story which has a total length of
» Read moreMy only fictional story in the first person. Other fiction has always been in third person. Any critique or comment more than welcome. I’m particularly keen to learn if any of the paragraphs should be shorter. (Including in Part 2 to follow) Thanks. This is the first part of a short story which has a total length of about 5500
» Read moreThis story is one of many in a book that I have published online. The eBook is called Jacqueline and Other Stories and is available on Smashwords & Books2read. Roses for Ever Sandra Maggs Once, in a far-off kingdom that existed in someone’s imagination, a mythical garden that had never been seen, but spoken of throughout the land,
» Read moreI am not a nice man. I’m a mean minded low-life bastard and that’s why I’ll survive. Nice people end up dead in my game.
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