This made me smile as my husband got the mower out today! Also we have catkins too, whereas last year for some reason we had none, Lovely spring poem.
Eira
This year the catkins seem extra long which is why I noticed them. I’m pleased my poem made you smile, personally I’m going nowhere near my mower untill I absolutely have to it’s not my favourite pastime fortunately the grass is still only short. Thank you for reading and commenting 🙂 Sue.
This made me smile, I loved every ‘so true’ line, you have caught the whole angst ridden journey perfectly. And I certainly agree with your last line I often think that would be much less fraught. 🙂 Sue.
Super poem, brought back memories of friends from long ago, a softer kinder time.
Love the layout very imaginative and interesting, suits the poem perfectly. Sue.
Hi Allets thank you for such a floral comment, loved it 🙂 As for the extra comma, that will be ushered out of the door immediately I appreciate you pointing it out, I cannot understand where my knowledge of grammar has disappeared to, I used to be spot on, but now I continually slip up, I do look it up but it just runs away again. Sue xx
PS, just found yours, couldn’t see them earlier for some reason. I know you don’t want comments but may I just say I very much enjoyed them both. X
My early petals are flaunting their wares – – oh, you meant flowers. The crocuses in their yellowness have arrived; up through snow is always best. The daffs are about to walk the runway, and the tulips, possibly stunted being overly exposed to hot and cold reviews, are representing in inches. Lovely spring write. After “blow,” the comma is extra.
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ps I closed comments on my poems to concentrate on writing. May open in autumn. Prosing a lot lately. Be well ~allets~
It’s actually a pdf document I uploaded, Trevor. White background. Thanks for the comment. Good to encounter you again. You’ve given me an idea for a new name. I think I’ll refer to myself as Birmingham’s blinkin’ barmiest bard.
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