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  • From Alfie_Shoyger on Cafe verse

    Jolly good, Parson. I liked this.

    What do you think of the new UKA? We’re revamping. Why not come back and help us make it great?

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    2019/06/01 at 4:20 pm
  • From Alfie_Shoyger on Intrusion

    This is a nice little poem. Have you written anything else?

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    2019/06/01 at 4:08 pm
  • ifyouplease

    From ifyouplease on Lately

    I really like the poems submitted for the challenge, yours is another very good one! Thank you very much!

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    2019/06/01 at 2:36 pm
  • ifyouplease

    From ifyouplease on View Beyond

    I loved it, excellent poem thank you very much for joining and sharing this delicately crafted poem.

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    2019/06/01 at 2:30 pm
    • featheredwing

      From featheredwing on View Beyond

      Thank you so much for your kind words and letting me know you enjoyed.

      Featheredwing.

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      2019/06/02 at 12:17 pm
  • From Alfie_Shoyger on The Cockney Wife

    Nice subtle and occasional rhyming.

    Perhaps needs the word “trouble” in there somewhere as well?…

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    2019/06/01 at 12:40 pm
  • ifyouplease

    From ifyouplease on Just A Small Box.

    painful to read, very effective poem
    Oh my God! it’s going to be a living hell then.

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    2019/05/31 at 2:00 pm
    • sweetwater

      From sweetwater on Just A Small Box.

      Hi, this reply may be repeated, no idea why it’s nothing to do with me, sorry.
      Thank you for reading and commenting, but it won’t be a living hell, honestly. You are not on your own and not the only one feeling the pain so that will make it easier to bear over time.
      Learning to live without my Harvey is still very hard, and I still cry, but I can also get on with my life and enjoy it too, it doesn’t take anything away from my grief it’s just the next step of it I think. Please don’t let the dread of the loss stop you from loving them and enjoying your time with them.
      Xx sue.

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      2019/05/31 at 4:05 pm
  • ifyouplease

    From ifyouplease on Lately I Find

    very interesting poem thank you for joining,
    I may be completely wrong but is it about hating God? Is it about losing one’s religion like in that song by REM?

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    2019/05/31 at 1:27 pm
  • mitch

    From mitch on Hall of mirrors

    Interesting but disturbing: almost makes you feel you might have a dissociative identity disorder when you emerge!

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    2019/05/31 at 12:54 pm
    • Pelequininwonderland

      From Pelequininwonderland on Hall of mirrors

      Thank you, we do have dissociative identity disorder so were glad the idea came across

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      2019/05/31 at 3:20 pm
  • mitch

    From mitch on Just A Small Box.

    Hi Sue! Beautiful short again. Is it ‘encased’ or ‘incased’ – one of those words I’m never sure of!

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    2019/05/31 at 12:50 pm
    • sweetwater

      From sweetwater on Just A Small Box.

      Hi Mitch, this reply will be repeated for some weird reason, nothing I can do to stop it, sorry.
      Thank you so much for your kind words. Also a thank you for stumbling over that word too, I don’t feel it’s just me now 🙂 Just used my dictionary and it is ‘encased’ meaning to enclose, hopefully I will remember, but doubt it.
      Honestly I was always top of my class for spelling!
      I will amend. X

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      2019/05/31 at 3:46 pm
  • mitch

    From mitch on Burned Rubber Streets - Two Images

    Powerful stark social commentary. Impressive stuff and so sad.

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    2019/05/31 at 12:42 pm