the second mirroring
new, Lanturne + prosetry
no
longer
my soft side,
the match-girl wants
more
-I’ll buy matches with the last money and the girl knows her only help will then stop, there won’t be a next time, the winter is harsh, the beggar has left long ago, Jane Eyre is no longer in love with his memory, but wishes him well. Adopting the girl is out of the question, the same goes for Jane Eyre finding a new beggar on Poverty Street. A daughter should know all these.
-You’ll buy matches with the last money and the girl knows her only help will never stop wanting to help, there probably will be a next time, next winter may be mild, the beggar is gone for now, Jane Eyre is no longer unsure about their love. Adopting the girl is never out of the question but it is for Jane Eyre, there’ll always be a new beggar on Poverty Street. A mother should know all these.
no
longer
my tough side,
Jane Eyre wants
less
Athens, 2021
Fabulous! Had to look up the style but you managed it with aplomb!
Alison x
I’ve been writing today and making it bigger connecting it more with ‘the mirroring’ and nothing but a soppy song maybe when I nail it I will add the parts which will make it a lanturne based prosetry
thanks Alisonx
added the parts I’ve been working on.
Your imagination and creativity knows no bounds.
Astounding all round. perfect mirror image. You make me question so much with your ever present in-depth thinking.
Alison x
thanks Alison! x
O boy! It’s splendid, from end-to-end. I hated this term when my colleagues used it, I don’t know why!
I liked both the sides.
More power to you girl.
thanks Supratik!
This is a stunning piece of work. The mirrors complement each other perfectly.
the problem is that not even I can be sure who speaks as a mother or a daughter, I think therefore I expressed exactly how it is when the Self stops massaging its Ego because its Ego never reciprocates / returns the favor in fear of massaging the wrong Self. but who knows it may be the other way around.
thanks Pilgermann – very much
Enjoyed the poem.
thank you!