Yesterday

Yesterday

Yesterday I learned a word
I almost forgot
And that was
Fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck!
Believe me I never felt so young
So charged, so animated.
I’m sure this cold storage of a place
Got back its hold, its togetherness.

Come, my dear friend
I seek your forgiveness
I was wrong, I am sorry
No worries please.
Enlighten the space
Write your charming stories
If we cannot work together
Let’s leave each other at peace.

© supratik 2020
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 <span title="Experienced Commenter" style="font-size : small; color: orange;">**</span><p>

Really?

Maybe you should delete the poem you posted yesterday then.

 <span title="Experienced Commenter" style="font-size : small; color: orange;">**</span><p>

OK. In future, could you please post a maximum of just two poems per publishing day? That is the rule here. If you post six like today, then you take over the front page.

Guaj

Strange: I thought you were against rules, Alfie πŸ˜‰

Guaj

If you want to hold back any posts go to manage and put then into sleep mode called trash (no pun intended) then you can restore them when you are ready for them to go out. Alternatively when you go to restore you have the option to delete them and re-post later.
Be Cool……
…….Be Happy
…….Be Smart

Ifyouplease

it’s better if you make submissions drafts save as drafts and not trash, trash automatically deletes your submissions in 30 days, I lost some of mine this way, I thought they were still stored.

Guaj

I didn’t know that, thanks. However, all my stuff is stored on file on SD cards and memory sticks

Ifyouplease

lost reads and comments, it was the most read article of mine. Posted elsewhere, received what we call here a nib, thousands of reads within hours.

Guaj

I never heard the word “Fuck” until I was about ten years old and I didn’t know what is meant, but I knew enough not to repeat in within my mother’s hearing range if I wanted to stay in one piece.

Now of course it’s as common as any minor cuss word and it’s lost it’s power to shock. All we have now is “cunt” and even that’s losing it’s teeth.

Sad.

Ifyouplease

yes you’re right.

Munster

In Ireland we say feck, even the priests as it a cuss more than a swear word. You say you learnt a new word and also you mention I almost forgot. I don’t get that…

Munster

Not as f ache F-eck as in h-eck

Munster

It was used a lot on Father Ted…

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