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Sweetwater
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Does this mean the mistakes made by you are too hard to forgive, and those by her are not? Intriguing, would like to know more. Sue.

Franciman
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Hi Richard,
A small gem, in my humble opinion. Says such a lot with a great deal of economy; clever, too…
Cheers,
Jim

Stormwolf
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Ah yes! The first flush of love can so easily become tainted with resentment. A minefield for the unwary. Great poem, well done on the nib an’ all.
Alison x

Ifyouplease
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what’s unforgivable in love

big subject

Ukadmin
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Thanks for the kind comments. This isn’t really a poem… it’s just words that came to me and I quickly jotted them down. Just words and ‘out-loud’ thoughts! Thanks all 🙂

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