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Letting Go .....
by valdohren
Originally published on November 27, 2015 in Poetry        


Speaks for iself ….



It’s okay love, you can go now,
but set the door ajar as you leave –
just enough for the light of your memory
to shine through.

We’ve gone a long way, you and I, on this journey,
but I am tired now, in need of rest –
so I will stay here and say goodbye.

Yes, it’s okay love, you can go now,
be where you ought to be –
I’ll still dream of you …



© valdohren (ValDohren on OLD UKA)

UKArchive ID: 35870
Archived comments for Letting Go …..


Mikeverdi on 27-11-2015
Letting Go …..
Ah Val, it says it all.

Mike

XxX

Author’s Reply:
Thanks Mike.

Val xxx


Texasgreg on 27-11-2015
Letting Go …..
Aye Val,

Letting go is something we must get used to. Sometimes for our benefit, sometimes for that of another. It's when fate intervenes and necessitates that it seems most difficult. memories are a godsend and curse, both…

Best,

Greg 🙂

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Author’s Reply:
Thank you for looking in and commenting Greg, much appreciated.

Val x


sweetwater on 27-11-2015
Letting Go …..
Such a loving poem, sensitively written. Sue xx

Author’s Reply:
Thank you Sue.

Val xx


franciman on 27-11-2015
Letting Go …..
Love captured entire in 10 short lines, Val

There's no more to say.

Jim x

Author’s Reply:
Thank you for looking in and commenting Jim. Much appreciated.

Val x


ValDohren on 27-11-2015
Letting Go …..
Thank you for the nib and nom, delighted of course.

Val x

Author’s Reply:


Ionicus on 28-11-2015
Letting Go …..
Well done on the nib and nomination, they are are well deserved Val. Whoever did the selections know a good thing when they see it.

Luigi x

Author’s Reply:
Thank you Luigi, you are very kind.

Val x


Bozzz on 28-11-2015
Letting Go …..
You will never walk alone? A truly loving parting. If only divorce was as easy and brief as this great poem suggests it might be! Well done Val…..David

Author’s Reply:
Thank you David. Not sure that divorce would carry the same sentiments though!

Val xx


pommer on 28-11-2015
Letting Go …..
Well composed Valerie.So much said in so few lines on such a sad subject.Peter xxx

Author’s Reply:
Thanks for reading and commenting Peter.

Val xxx