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Benno79
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Hey guys. My name is Ben and I live in Portsmouth. I hope you can help me in my quest to become a published author.

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Posted : May 13, 2017 6:07 pm
Elfstone
Member

Welcome Benno79! I hope you will enjoy using the site and getting to know the active members. 🙂

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Posted : May 14, 2017 1:00 pm
sirat
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Hello Ben. Welcome to the site. I think that's our primary reason for being here, although it's starting to be questioned a bit. I hope I'll be able to offer some useful feedback.

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Posted : May 15, 2017 9:41 am
gothicman
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Hi Ben, and welcome to the site. If you submit some work, hopefully you will receive useful critique and enjoy the mutual benefits of the interaction. Some of us are just hoping that receiving critique at this level is not obligatory, that we can present and improve our work ourselves too, using only the encouraging feedback and openness of others. That is all we have questioned.

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Posted : May 15, 2017 10:45 am
ionicus
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Hello Ben and welcome. Although members will be keen to help in your endeavour what  will determine whether you become a published author depends on how good your writing is. My advice is to be careful about grammar. I noticed in your opening to La Scaligeri that you wrote: 'it has it’s dark side'. The 'it's' and 'its' are often used erroneously and particular attention ought be be paid to instances such as that. Also, if you want to make use of foreign words make sure of their spelling or pronunciation.
It should be Buongiorno rather than Buonjourno.

 

 

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Posted : May 15, 2017 3:52 pm
e-griff
Member

Hi. Looking forward to seeing something from you on the submissions. 🙂 

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Posted : May 15, 2017 6:45 pm
andrea
Member

Welcome Benno!

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Posted : May 21, 2017 10:06 pm
  
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