XY Chromosomes
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Young boys playing
Young men laying
Work men haying
War men slaying
Show men swaying
Hard men flaying
Rich men weighing
Poor men paying
Bad men preying
Good men praying
Loud men braying
Wise men saying
Old men greying
Old boys playing
I liked this very much, not too sure the typos fit in though 😉 Sue x
Hi Sue. Thanks for your comment. I can’t see any typos though. Mind you, I do suffer from occasional doolalliness. Can you please point them out? Regards, Mick.
It was just the ‘Dad men praying’ didn’t sound right, I apologise I see what you mean now. 🙂 Sue.
No problem, Sue. Thinking about it, ‘Dad men’ just doesn’t sound right. I think I’ll change it to ‘Good men praying’. Thanks for the comment. I appreciate your words. Regards, Mick.
The circle of life in rhyme. As it was, so shall it ever be. You have managed to put a whole lot in those short lines. Well done.
blessings,
jolen
Thanks for the comment, Jolen. I think I’m hovering somewhere between ‘old men greying’ and ‘old boys playing’. Regards, Mick.
Hi Trevor. Thanks for the comment. Funny things chromosomes. An extra one can cause Downs Syndrome of course. I’ve actually written about folks with a XX chromosome combination (wimenfolks). It’s a humorous one which I’ll hopefully post here some time or other. Regards, Mick.