Five Seven Five

I’ve hit a wall with my story Natura Naturans. But have managed to jot down these 14 words.


Five seven five rule

Not as easy as it seems

To write good haiku

 

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Ionicus
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Can’t argue with that, Jay.

Archiemac
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For it to be a real haiku, you also have to mention, or at least allude to, one of the seasons. Otherwise it’s just a senryu. So no, not easy at all.

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